A for Alfi

Of the three essay's I read i found "A" to be more concise, and well written. The author provides a flow in terms of expressing her views. Although the thesis may be slightly unclear, and wordy; the general point of how Austen introduces characters through multiple means such as gossip is clearly understood. The author of "A" combined  complex writing and sufficiently detailed body paragraphs, to demonstrate a well constructed essay that superseded the ability of the writers of essay's "B" and "C" who presented good, yet wordy, over technical drafts.