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I definatly feel that i could of improved my essay on Pride and Prejudice if I managed my time and editing. The comments suggesting I improve on my structure to supplement the thesis prove to be a crucial mistake that seems to bring down my essay. The list of three was poor judgment in writing that led to a thesis that does not live up to college standards at all. Next time i will be sure to present my thesis more undestandablly whilst making my argument relevant.